October Morning
Foliage Vision
Autumn rain, Dirt road
Crisp air, Condensed breath, Embrace
These brazen colors
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C. H. Richard
My passion is and has always been writing. I am particularly drawn to writing fiction that has relatable storylines which hopefully keep readers engaged
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A Dart at Dusk
Seconds ago, the sullen sun set on the two of usโฆ my exuberant furry companion and me. A fresh breeze embraces us, delivering welcome relief from the dayโs oppressive heat. His typical stumbling and staggering along โ apace with a sloth โ has turned into trip-trapping, high-stepping, almost skipping along.
By Angie the Archivist ๐๐ชถ3 days ago in Petlife
Comments (11)
Perfect! I love Autumn! :)
I could almost smell Autumn in this! Great haiku!
This gave me a great feeling. Love the imagery it creates as well. Hearted and subscribed.
Yes!! Fall is my favorite time of year!! I could feel the crisp air and see the beautiful changing leaves. Wonderful imagery!!
sounds like every autumn I remember, nice writing ๐
Fantastic imagery!
This was so calm and nostalgic! Such beautiful words of choice!
Absolutely lovely!!! Left some love!!!
Beautifully done.
This is beautifully worded! When you said "Crisp air, Condensed breath," it took me somewhere and I saw sparkly jack-o-lanterns in the autumn night. Captivating! Very well done. :)
Oooooo. Love the feeling. Great haiku โค๏ธ
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