November Drum
Antiphony
After the swell of autumn color
Sparseness invades.
November's tympanic sky stretches
taut and translucent across an invisible frame.
.
The mountain range emerges a stark
Spinal cord from the distance
Vertebra to vertebra.
Trunks of trees and their outstretched
limbs - exposed nerves in the open air.
.
A bleach white sun bleeds
across the horizon, spread-lustre
upon the bare navel of the earth.
.
Through my body,
you can see the light.
.
The lakes hold their mouths agape.
Meadows lie catatonic, sinking
closer to bedrock. Sheets of ice
creak ten thousand miles away-
here, the sky resounds a
deep and unctuous tone.
.
Si sueltas un grito
resonará para siempre.
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Static stillness crackles.
Nothing is severed in the blank
clarity of winter.
Nodes and dendrites, and spaces
between vital.
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Sand at the edge of a steep crag -
feel the swelling urge to leap
clear to the other side.
How far can the self disperse?
Spaces between starlings
connected in spontaneous flight.
Space between object and
reflection in clouded lake.
To touch without touching.
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Si te miro, tu me mirarás.
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Attractive force of emptiness
lightning bolts and aurora borealis
the first branches of snowflakes drawn
From thin atmosphere.
To touch without touching -
fingertips and toes, hairs
standing on end.
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Far away, the ice carves
A jugular vein in the land
The ocean fills with whalesong
requiem.
.
Heartbeat of the earth
slows as it crescendos,
beating the November drum.
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Una vez, y una vez más
About the Creator
Kara Lu
Writing is my way of returning to myself. Nature is my most generous muse.



Comments (8)
Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Such rich, beautiful imagery that also resonates with the realities of the season. The sky "taut and translucent," the "exposed nerves" of the trees, and the "bleach white sun" are all beautiful but they also capture those images with incredible accuracy. Really well done.
So Wonderful Congratulations on the win !!!!! :)))
Kara, your poem is absolutely breathtaking; congratulations on your win❣👏🌹
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Congratulations! This is beautiful.
Congratulations! I am happy to see this beautiful poetry in first place.
Beautiful ❤️
Stunning, congrats on your well-deserved win 👏👏⋆꙳❅*❆