An Eagle Flew Above
hunting lessons
If freedom is an eagle
Why must it circle so, around and around and around
Below, we trace the broad and shadowed wingspan
wondering
If we are the creature hunted, or, if
by following it with determined eye, we can maintain
A tenuous upper-hand -
Even so, caught in its hypnotic power.
Only prey feign ignorance and lower their heads
for a drink of dew or a mouthful of fresh berries,
(their prerogative of pleasure, i suppose,
in exchange for martyrdom.)
But not us, we lay down, our backs against the damp humus
And follow the prayer which is an eagle soaring in the high winds.
There is grace in a hunter, we notice, like a melody in a song -
How brutish and ugly we have been in our own pursuits.
There are far too many gruesome victors in our games
The clumsy hacking down of others.
Not enough flying above and surveying from a birds-eye view -
Not enough singing, even of silent songs.
Not enough detached sovereignty.
The eagle knows nothing of the dog-eat-dog tales we tell
In staggering variety and drama to each other
and ourselves. What does it know?
When to glide, and when to pierce
How much to take. How to satiate.
Breath, rhythm, instinct.
Featherlight and definition.
The gun lies there choked by grass and vine.
The eagle above us draws patterns in the sky
Magnificent yes, but also soothing. Much closer to peace
Than violence. Talons on both ends elegant as the scythes
and obsidian blades scattered in the earth by
Our own ancestors. All creatures take their places
In the intricate web of predator and prey. Their fight is not
against their lot. There is still life to be had.
We have wasted our ammunition and burned our excesses.
Flesh and blood without consummation.
All who’ve hunted encounter a fork in their journey
And once they’ve walked down one path there is no turning back.
the eagle circles above that spot
Watching them take their turns. Some things,
It turns out, are black and white -
The heads and the tails of it.
There is no possibility of deceit under
These large golden eyes.
Until we learn the eagle’s balance, micro adjustments in midair,
the fumbling continues on and destruction with it.
If we cannot practice refinement, at the very least
We can play small. After all,
we are so soon out of the nest. Fledglings
in the grand scheme of things. Sticks in the ant holes,
Uncoordinated and hungry, still yearning for wisdom.
If freedom is an eagle we watch perplexed,
Not quite predator and not quarry
Just learning our share, heads turned skywards wide eyed
Mountains as our witness, moss wrapped around us
soft fingers touching the soft green saplings.
An eagle flew above us and preyed.
About the Creator
Kara Lu
Writing is my way of returning to myself. Nature is my most generous muse.
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