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Not Hot Enough

Elegy for What's Left in the Ashes

By Gerard DiLeoPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Not Hot Enough
Photo by Sam Jotham Sutharson on Unsplash

Cremation's afoot

In a mortal's rite of passage

With the guilt and the soot

Only immortality can ravage

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I watch through lead glass

The burning of flesh

Sublimating fed gas

To a soul's final crèche

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Corpulent dispatch

Ashen crumbs fall to gravity

But the soul unattached

Flees a legacy's depravity

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It panics in luminescence

Running from the fire

Suffers trapped evanescence

Incomplete in the pyre

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Absolution fails, fruitless lavage

Leaving cindered memories that suffer alive

Rejecting any respite from life's cruel barrage

Retrieving the regrets that reveries revive

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How much hotter does it need to be

To cleanse souls' sins that fear infinity?

How long should I burn it, to no longer see

An evil man's soul begging for clemency?

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I look closely and, painfully, inspect the bearer

Of a remorseless face begging, baselessly, for mercy

I cannot unsee, vacantly, the eyes of the terror

Of a soul unprepared for atonement's eternity

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About the Creator

Gerard DiLeo

Retired, not tired. Hippocampus, behave!

Make me rich! https://www.amazon.com/Gerard-DiLeo/e/B00JE6LL2W/

My substrack at https://substack.com/@drdileo

[email protected]

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