Nightmare 32
Mouthful of Nightmare
Smooth against your tongue
Spontaneous crunch of bone
Spitting shards of tooth
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Amos Glade
Welcome to Pteetneet City & my World of Weird. Here you'll find stories of the bizarre, horror, & magic realism as well as a steaming pile of poetry. Thank you for reading.
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Comments (12)
*gags* Congratulations on your win!
Congratulations on your win, Amos! I agree with Alexandria; the cover image only adds to the imagery.❤
EEKK and the picture only adds to the imagery! Congrats on the win!
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Oh my lord; you captured this feeling so perfectly, I'm not surprised you won. Congratulations!
Visceral, uncomfortable imagery. Absolutely fantastic. Congratulations on the well-deserved win! Photo is also delightfully disturbing.
Eww, OMG - Truly the stuff of nightmares. Congrats on your win!
🎊🎈I don't feel okay looking at this photo, lol. But I also don't want to scroll down... Maybe a little peak... Oh my gosh. No. If this ever happen to me. I might just die. Dying right now thinking about it. This was fantastic. Congratulations on your challenge win 🤗 ❤️ 🖤 👏🏾 👌🏾 🎈🎊
Congratulations on the win!
Great verse and congratulations on your win
Congratulations on your win!
Wow. This is visceral, makes my teeth hurt just reading it. Excellent word choice, all the sharp consonants makes the impact of each line all the heavier. The action here hits hard and fast. I think “spontaneous” is the word that stands out most to me, showing that this sudden dental agony isn’t the result of anything but bad luck, and that’s scary in and of itself. Cool haiku, taking a real world injury and making it graphic enough to qualify as a horror story in 17 syllables