I need you
I want you
To hold me
And don't let go
*
Tightly
Lovingly
Hold me
And never let go
*
Give me your attention.
Give me your love.
Hold me
I never want to let go.
*
To feel you
To touch you
Holding me
And never letting go
*
Your lips
Touching mine
While you are holding me
And never letting go
*
Stay with me.
Don't you dare go
I need you to hold me
And never letting go
*
our body next to mine
Your arms around me
Holding me
And never letting go
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THAT REPETITION shook me 😍
Awww, this was so sweet! Wonderful poem!
Beautiful! 💜