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NATURE'S SECRETS

they're amazing

By Margaret BrennanPublished about a year ago 1 min read
NATURE'S SECRETS
Photo by Jared Erondu on Unsplash

NATURE’S SECRETS

They’re amazing

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If you see a feather in the sky, are you ever tempted to ask why

If floats so gently to the ground, when you can feel no breeze around?

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When flowers of spring bloom from the earth, do you ever wonder who gave them birth?

When the trees are laden with winter’s ice, while it may be cold, they look so nice.

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Have you ever sat and watched the rain to find the drops are not the same,

Just like the flakes of fresh fallen snow? It’s nature’s amusement we’ll never know.

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Nature’s secrets are her private thing, just like God’s rainbow ring.

Nature’s secrets will stay untold, but will always remain our pots of gold.

*** It's taken me over an hour to get this submitted. I keep getting a stupid popup saying that JSON is rejecting the format. HUH? I've been using the same format since I joined Vocal years ago. IS ANYONE ELSE HAVING THIS PROBLEM?***

nature poetry

About the Creator

Margaret Brennan

I am a 78-year old grandmother who loves to write, fish, and grab my camera to capture the beautiful scenery I see around me.

My husband and I found our paradise in Punta Gorda Florida where the weather always keeps us guessing.

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  • Testabout a year ago

    i love this piece

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    Beautiful nature poem. Love all the lines in this poem 💞

  • C. Rommial Butlerabout a year ago

    Well-wrought! Nature is a balm for me, so this piece resonates! As for your JSON problem, it happened to me too. I had to change the pic I used, and it cleared it up.

  • Lana V Lynxabout a year ago

    Beautiful poem, Margaret. And yes, Vocal’s Jason seems to be having issues with title pictures. On one of my recent stories I had to embed the video rather than upload a pic.

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    Great little story. I have never really noticed before about the raindrops being different. I may take a closer look if it rains again. Yes, that pop up is happening to me to on a few pieces I wanted to post. I am going to try again though pretty soon. Yesterday, I had trouble leaving comments but I am now.

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