Naot (Oasis)
A crown cinquain poem about one of my favourite places on the planet: Ein Gedi, Israel
Fresh breeze
the smell of spring
clean, perfumed, balmy
the cool winds touch, and tickled me
nature.
The fields
crisp, tall palm trees
leafy, thriving, dark green
tropical plants twirled nonstop
lively.
Gardens
flowers of all
colours, shapes, sizes, and
unique varieties that are
artful.
The sea
blue and bubbly
frothy, aqua, holy
a large, outdoor bath of salty
liquid.
Masada
desert fortress
ancient, rocky, dark beige
sandy stairs to walk and climb on
fitness.
Thank you for taking the time to read another one of my crown cinquain poems. If you've been to Ein Gedi before, I'm sure we'll have something in common! If you enjoyed this poem, please give it a ❤️, share it with others and feel free to send me a tip/pledge to show your support and appreciation. To find and read more of my Vocal publications, please subscribe to me and visit my public profile. Please feel free to connect with and follow me on Instagram. Until next time!
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Talia Devora
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Comments (4)
I felt so transported I could almost smell the salt! Great poem! 💖 I'm subscribing!
Beautiful & brilliant!!!💖💕
A lovely poem for a lovely place. I would love to visit Ein Gedi someday.
Thank you for sharing this! I felt like I was right there with you, enjoying the beauty of nature. Well done :)