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My Secret Love Is No More

Not the ending I dreamed of.

By Marie381Uk Published 9 months ago Updated 9 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

My Secret Love Is No More

You made me laugh when nothing could,

You looked at me like no one should,

I felt like fire, I felt like sin,

And I would do it all again.

We met in corners, closed the blinds,

Spoke with eyes, ignored the signs,

I was yours, but not in name,

And loving you still lit the flame.

I bit my lip to stop the truth,

I painted over fading youth,

We danced on glass, we broke the bed,

We killed the quiet in my head.

But secrets sweat, and secrets slip,

They slide from tongue, from trembling lips,

One careless word, one broken trust,

And suddenly, it all turned dust.

They called me names, said I was a whore,

They split us up, we were no more,

The love like candy soon turned sour,

Once we were strong, now we lost all power.

The film was good, then came the end,

You locked your door, for us it was the end.

I see it now, the ending clear,

My secret love has cost me dear.

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Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Raymond G. Taylor9 months ago

    Wonderful. I really felt the passion

  • Lightning Bolt ⚡9 months ago

    Marie... I don't know how to contact you directly. We need to be FB friends going forward. I know you are hurt but **please back off**. Delete your comments. Take down your post. Allow me time to help. Please! I have your back. What you are doing now is simply alerting these people they are caught. It's not just one person, IMO. I suspect you're alerting MANY people, and that could mean they'll remove evidence before I can document it. Allow me time, please, to cross-reference and compile evidence! I've been working on this since I woke up and I've barely scratched the surface. Go to the Vocal Social Society on FB for more! I hesitate to tell you any of this in comments because, again: I don't want these people to know we're on to them!!!

  • Mark Graham9 months ago

    You writing draws a picture of a relationship that really should not have happened. Good job.

  • Nicely written

  • Nikita Angel9 months ago

    Beautiful, superb and fantastic

  • Muhammad Ahtsham9 months ago

    Amzing

  • Cotheeka Srijon9 months ago

    excellent

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