I open my eyes, but I can not see.
It seems a darkness has surrounded me.
Am I dead, am I sleeping, am I possibly blind?
These questions begin to fill in my mind.
I recover my thoughts, I need to focus now.
I have to escape, but I don't know how.
I step forward, slowly, with caution and fear.
I shout out loud, "IS ANYONE NEAR?"
I press on ahead, with so much doubt,
but I have to find...some way out.
I walk on for miles, there is nothing at all.
Not an object on the floor, or even a wall.
In this darkness, there seems to be no end.
Alone in the dark, without a single friend.
"WHY IS THIS HAPPENING? " I yelled with might.
Not even an echo, it gave me a fright.
I continue to move without knowing why.
I can't stop now, I still have to try.
I pick up the pace, to cover more ground.
The steps I take, make the only sound.
What did I do to get into this mess?
The cold and quiet of eternal darkness.
I must have not been doing so well,
to be stuck in this, my personal hell.
I begin to wonder how much time had pass, or even of the food I've eaten last.
I run even faster, now filling with rage.
The distance I've traveled, I can't even gauge.
This darkness continues to mess with my mind, but I am determined, the end I will find.
I continue to run, full speed ahead,
I must've been cursed, punished, or dead.
I stumbled, then tripped, and I land on my side.
"I GIVE UP", I shouldn't have tried.
I curl in a ball, as I lie on the floor.
I don't have it in me to run anymore.
Alone in the darkness I begin to cry,
"I've suffered enough, please let me die."
My head in my knees, filling with tears.
Suddenly a warmth, it relieved all my fears.
I raised my head slowly, there is a radiant light.
Could it finally be the end of my plight?
I turned and look up, at your beautiful face.
Angelic, and warm, my heart begins to race.
You reach out your hand, and smile so pure.
Relieving my pain that I use to endure.
I reach for your hand, the darkness would fade.
With your radiant light, I am no longer afraid.
Now in your arms, my heart filled with glee,
The rest of the world I can finally see.
Suddenly surrounded by family and friends.
I look in your eyes, this must be the end.
You pull me in close, to whisper in my ear.
"This is the beginning, the end is no where near. "
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L.A. Domenech
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