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My H-a-v-o-c

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By KomalPublished 9 months ago 1 min read

You smiled

and the light

touched my s-o-u-l

You spoke

and my pulse

forgot to h-i-d-e

You looked

and my calm

split like f-i-r-e

You came close

and my breath

turned to w-i-n-e

You stayed

and I burned

like a s-u-n

You loved

and I

drowned in f-l-a-m-e-s

because you

were my

havoc—my w-i-l-d

love poemssurreal poetryStream of Consciousness

About the Creator

Komal

I write poems and stories that hit the feels.

When I’m not lost in my own plots, I’m either daydreaming about the next big idea or just winging life with a grin.

𝕀 𝕙𝕒𝕧𝕖 𝕥𝕙𝕖 ℙ𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕠 𝕞𝕒𝕜𝕖 𝕒𝕟 𝕀𝕄ℙ𝔸ℂ𝕋

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Outstanding

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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    Zero grammar & spelling mistakes

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    Creative use of language & vocab

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  • Mother Combs8 months ago

    So lovely, komal

  • What a poem! Too good you are, komal! I love it! Best! 💯❤️

  • Rohitha Lanka8 months ago

    Captivating poem and well written.

  • Sid Aaron Hirji9 months ago

    really nice positive love poem

  • Lou Holz9 months ago

    This is so beautifully written, soft, intense, and full of feeling. Absolutely loved it

  • Luna Verity9 months ago

    I love this! Another amazing piece, Komal!

  • Ali Sadeek Ahmed9 months ago

    Beautiful

  • Euan Brennan9 months ago

    Loved it! Nicely done as usual, Komal. I don't know why, but I'm always trying to find the secret message hidden in the bold letters. You gotta give me a hint if there is a secret.

  • Archery Owl9 months ago

    Spicy! I love it

  • kikii9 months ago

    Whew, Love like this—Dangerous, unwise and absolutely worth it! Brilliantly written.

  • Masterful, Beautiful, Like The Phoenix!

  • Rowan Finley 9 months ago

    This is quite stirring and wonderful! :)

  • StoryTime9 months ago

    such a beautiful poet

  • Marie381Uk 9 months ago

    As usual so fabulous you poetry tell a story so great every time ⭐️🍀👌🖌️🏆

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