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My eyes cried a sea of tears

Enough to sink a ship

By Marie381Uk Published about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
George’s Girl 2025

My eyes cried a sea of tears

The ship sailed on the tears from my eyes,

The captain called, Slow down, please, girl!

Each time your tears begin to fall,

The waves rise high, and we lose control.

I cried oceans, my eyes burned red,

Letting you ruin my life instead.

You treated me like dirt, unclean,

A love that cut, a bitter dream.

The captain sent a flare to the sky,

“Stop the tears, or we’ll all die.

Stop the tears, your life repair

You’ve more to give, beyond despair.

Was it real, or in my head?

I stopped crying—was the ship now dead?

The crew, the waves, the sinking tide,

All faded as I dried my eyes.

A choice remained: to carry on,

Or sink beneath a love now gone.

Two days have passed, my tears run dry,

I bid you now my last goodbye.

I sunk you to the ocean floor,

The fish have feasted, you’re no more.

At last, I’m free, my heart can soar,

The storm has passed; I weep no more.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    A poem that could provoke a good, refreshing cry and release any tension that might be felt.

  • Andrew C McDonaldabout a year ago

    Wow. What a fantastic metaphorical triumph. Great job Marie. Love this. 🚤💙🛥️🛳️⛴️🚢💙

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