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My Apricot Tree

yeah i know it needs a good prune

By BrenPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
My apricot tree and my view.

my poor old apricot tree

stripped by the Rainbows

before they departed

for warmer climes

my chickens are scratching around her base

Mynahs rest in her multidirectional branches

(yeah she could do with a good prune this year)

and we might get more fruit

some of that seaweed fertiliser

and a whole lot of TLC

it's a good tree

and she has taken more than her fair share

of the sting

of an evening summers sun

she has been battered

both by wind and by the rain

pruned up and slender

so as not to impede the grassy area

beneath her summer fronds

we both watch

as we wait

nature poetry

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Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran3 years ago

    Oooo, do share a picture and another poem once you've pruned her! 😁

  • Heather Hubler3 years ago

    Lovely view :) I enjoyed this.

  • Dana Stewart3 years ago

    A great view! A pretty poem for a pretty tree.

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