
my poor old apricot tree
stripped by the Rainbows
before they departed
for warmer climes
my chickens are scratching around her base
Mynahs rest in her multidirectional branches
(yeah she could do with a good prune this year)
and we might get more fruit
some of that seaweed fertiliser
and a whole lot of TLC
it's a good tree
and she has taken more than her fair share
of the sting
of an evening summers sun
she has been battered
both by wind and by the rain
pruned up and slender
so as not to impede the grassy area
beneath her summer fronds
we both watch
as we wait
About the Creator
Bren
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"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
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Comments (3)
Oooo, do share a picture and another poem once you've pruned her! 😁
Lovely view :) I enjoyed this.
A great view! A pretty poem for a pretty tree.