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Murderous mystery

Who do you believe?

By Raymond G. TaylorPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
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And so dear friends it comes to this:

Our despicable death-dealing authoress,

Whose tales of mystery and murder enthral,

But who has deceived us, one and all.

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The victim? A housemaid: dutiful, loyal,

Has shuffled off this mortal coil.

Not content, she wanted more.

Saint or sinner, maiden, whore?

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The husband, his folly plain to be seen.

He tried to keep his record clean,

Yet heady infatuation prevailed,

But was it his, or was it the girl's?

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Now our three players are introduced,

What from their evidence can be deduced?

Perhaps there is one more character left.

Surely, the book of the deed we must test?

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Unravel the mystery if you dare

  • Narrator the first: the authoress
  • Narrator the second: the 'faithful' servant?
  • Narrator the third: the husband
  • Narrator the final: The Unfaithful Servant - "The book that's on everyone's lips" (Fable and Fable).

Which of these narrators is reliable?

O ~ 0 ~ o ~

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About the Creator

Raymond G. Taylor

Author living in Kent, England. Writer of short stories and poems in a wide range of genres, forms and styles. A non-fiction writer for 40+ years. Subjects include art, history, science, business, law, and the human condition.

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  • John Coxabout a year ago

    Clever bit of prosody and a challenge!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Mysterious!!! Loved it!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    You definitely gave us something to think about with this one.

  • Hehehehehehehe I'm getting even more excited now!

  • Testabout a year ago

    Hmm…very intriguing 😊

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    Colour me intrigued!

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