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Mr. Moon

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By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 3 years ago โ€ข 1 min read
Mr. Moon
Photo by Benjamin Voros on Unsplash

Everythingโ€™s shady except for you...

How do you stand there in the darkness, and still shine through?

you have seen me unbalanced, yet you still watch my life...

I stay up late just to see you again.

I want you to teach me how to face the twilight, and still, shine bright...

Lucky you are, to constantly Party with the stars...

As a child, I watched you Never Go Far...

Maybe change your Shade but never your Texture...

Now and then you appear as a Crescent...

I speak to you but I wonder if you get my Message ๐Ÿ’ฌ

High up in the sky, you watch everyone Pass by...

I wonder if you've met the Sun?

Did you know that You guys Both share the sky?

I would come to visit if I could Fly...

One day I'll Grasp,

The White Snowball Stuck in the sky at Night!

By Esaias Tan on Unsplash

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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)

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  • Veronica Coldiron3 years ago

    I love your use of contrast to relay strong feelings. Truly beautiful

  • Let me know when you go- Iโ€™ll tag along

  • Very mesmerizing!

  • Gina C.3 years ago

    So beautiful! Amazing work!

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    this is a wonderful piece. Love it.

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Beautiful ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ˜Š

  • Love it

  • Tiffany Gordon3 years ago

    Supercute!!!!

  • Great symbolism with a hint of nostalgia and romanticism. Well done!!!

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