
Mountain Mist
I climb where the air grows thin,
clouds curling like smoke around jagged stone.
The wind bites, and the world shrinks
to the path beneath my feet, the rock I touch,
and the endless sky above.
Mist rolls across valleys,
softening edges, hiding peaks,
making the earth a dream I can step into,
but cannot hold.
Birds call across the emptiness,
their wings cutting through invisible walls,
and I follow, trying to keep pace,
knowing the mountain moves with its own will.
At the top, the world is quiet,
not dead, but waiting.
I stand in the fog,
and it feels like the first breath of life,
fresh, pure, untamed,
and I let it fill me completely.
Rocks jut from the earth like frozen waves,
paths twist and spiral like forgotten thoughts.
Every step is a question,
every pause a revelation,
and I realize the mountain teaches
not in answers, but in the stillness between.
I sit on a ledge,
clouds brushing my knees,
listening to the wind sing
in tongues only the mountains understand.
Time loses its meaning here,
seconds folding into eternity,
and I feel a part of something
that existed before and will linger long after.

About the Creator
Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️



Comments (2)
I could see everything very clearly. Beautiful. Good job.
Reminds me of some of my hunting trips