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Mother You Hurt M

An Acrostic Sonnet

By Patrick M. OhanaPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
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Mother you hurt M before you expired

On a damp day in two thousand thirteen

Thunder and lightening were loosely wired

Hell was above before M met Athene

Every mother is not a good mother

Reason is not incumbent on the right

Yesterdays turn to tomorrows rather

Over many years or a single night

Under a tree the warmth is genuine

Healing the past with a natural now

Under a genetic tie a red line

Running along a string of anyhow

Thank you for all the memories restored

M did not hurt you when the time was scored

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Dedicated to M’s father.

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John Lennon - Mother

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About the Creator

Patrick M. Ohana

A medical writer who reads and writes fiction and some nonfiction, although the latter may appear at times like the former. Most of my pieces (over 2,200) are or will be available on Shakespeare's Shoes.

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