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Penelope My Love

An Acrostic Sonnet

By Patrick M. OhanaPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Penelope My Love
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Picasso would have failed to capture you

Enveloped in the past and the future

Naked only for one man's deja vu

Enamoured by his sense of touch-suture.

Love you he does and will and always did

Over driving-mad decades of decay

Pacifying life with love and undid

Entreating oblivion to replay

Memories of beginnings and endings

Yesterdays not too many to tally.

Love wet with constant passion and mendings

Opens a window on a finale

Visualising movements and smooth skin

Every free moment until the last spin.

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Dedicated to Penelope Israel.

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Joan Manuel Serrat - Penelope (In Spanish)

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About the Creator

Patrick M. Ohana

A medical writer who reads and writes fiction and some nonfiction, although the latter may appear at times like the former. Most of my pieces (over 2,200) are or will be available on Shakespeare's Shoes.

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  • Marie381Uk 12 months ago

    Fantastic ♦️♦️♦️♦️♦️♦️♦️♦️

  • Andrea Corwin 2 years ago

    Superb! This line is so wonderful - Yesterdays not too many to tally.

  • Dawnxisoul393art2 years ago

    Well done on capturing the essence of your dedication in such a poetic and evocative manner, thank you!

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