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Imagine we could build a gun
That fired kisses one by one
Bullets of love penetrating deep
Shot into hearts that couldn’t weep
Sending love through the air
Marking the end of war and despair
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Comments (12)
Now wouldn't this be lovely! Yes please!
Now this is a gun that I want! How I wish this really existed! You're so amazing to think of this!
This was excellent! Short, nice rhyme and not what I expected at all. Well done!
Fantastic poem! I wish we could, the world would be a better place
I love this so much, I love that you got me a bit with the title since for some reason my eye goes there with the notification, then I saw your name next to it. Really beautifully done.
Love it 😍
Yes!!! More like this. Spread the word!
Love this, Kayleigh! Well done!
your profile taj mahal. I'm proud to be Indian. 'Bharat mata ki jai'
That would be awesome!
If only. This was wonderful.
Lol this is funny and probably going to get top story!