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Moon’s Vigil

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By Teresa RentonPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Moon’s Vigil
Photo by Guilherme Coelho on Unsplash

My mother’s last sleep—

Moon, I covet what you watched,

before night stole her

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Teresa Renton

Inhaling life, exhaling stories, poetry, prose, flash or fusions. An imperfect perfectionist who writes and recycles words. I write because I love how it feels to make ink patterns & form words, like pictures, on a page.

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  • Stephen Kramer Avitabile12 months ago

    Wow, the idea that the moon saw her last moments. That was such an interesting angle on such a common, yet sad occurrence, that many deal with. Amazing and emotional work!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    The moon sees it all. well done. Also, sorry for your loss.

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