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My mother’s last sleep—
Moon, I covet what you watched,
before night stole her
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Thank you for spending a moment with my words. If you like the way I play with letters from the alphabet, I would be honoured to have you as my guest, on my profile, where you can read whatever takes your fancy. If you’d like to read more haiku, they’re all here:
About the Creator
Teresa Renton
Inhaling life, exhaling stories, poetry, prose, flash or fusions. An imperfect perfectionist who writes and recycles words. I write because I love how it feels to make ink patterns & form words, like pictures, on a page.


Comments (2)
Wow, the idea that the moon saw her last moments. That was such an interesting angle on such a common, yet sad occurrence, that many deal with. Amazing and emotional work!
The moon sees it all. well done. Also, sorry for your loss.