
Monday Morning Blues
So many choices, all destined to lose,
The coffee is bitter, my thoughts bruised.
The clock ticks louder than it should,
Mocking the dreams I misunderstood.
Gray sky yawns, the pavement hums,
Traffic crawls, the silence drums.
Another week, another spin,
Same old race, no way to win.
somewhere deep in sleepy eyes,
A spark still fights, a hope still tries.
Maybe not today, maybe not soon,
But even blues can change their tune.
About the Creator
Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insight
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions


Comments (2)
Verrrrrry Nice
Wow! nice and relatable poem. I loved it!