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Mobius Home

Round and round we all go.

By Lolly VieiraPublished 8 months ago 1 min read
Mobius Home
Photo by Tangerine Newt on Unsplash

You're staring at it all at once—

an infinite row of bricks,

laid end to end like a hush in the throat of time.

They circle your home

(not a box, not a cage—

just the membranes around breath).

The path loops quiet in zeroes,

a nothing whisper,

a shape you could cradle

if your hands forgot how to feel edges.

But—twist it.

Just that.

Let the echo fold once.

Let it sigh through itself,

bend the zero like a dream

remembering its own awakening.

Now it stands:

8

Not two circles,

but infinite symmetry

acting as our architecture.

Everything walks here.

Every thought, a stone.

Every exhale, mortar.

The house—

a loop of being and unbeing,

my spine bends in the pattern of it.

8

and it’s all mine.

and it’s all yours.

and it was never either one.

and it was both.

So walk with me.

We’ll meet ourselves

on the other side

of the same step.

I'll see you in between.

Free VerseStream of Consciousnesssurreal poetryinspirational

About the Creator

Lolly Vieira

Welcome to my writing page where I make sense of all the facets of myself.

I'm an artist of many mediums and strive to know and do better every day.

https://linktr.ee/lollyslittlelovelies

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  • Clinton Wanjala8 months ago

    This poem is stunning. Its like a meditation wrapped in metaphor. It reads like philosophy set to breath, folding space and self into something intimate and cosmic at once. That turn from zero to eight? Beautifully executed and quietly profound.

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