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Oh Jane, I miss you
A ghost upside down, cries mist
Twists my tears, lake haunt
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Your words are hauntingly beautiful, expressing a deep sense of loss and longing for someone you miss dearly. The imagery of the ghost crying mist and twisting tears is particularly striking and creates a strong visual in the reader's mind. Well done!🧡🧡
Niiiice!
Sweet!!! Loved it!!!