Milo's Midnight Wish
A Poem for Vocal's Love in 50 Words challenge
This is a poem for Vocal's Love in 50 words Challenge and Mikeydred's Feburary prompt.
Love should never be left to go cold. - Michelle Liew
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Milo wished his love would stay
And ensured she could never walk away
He grinned wide; she stood, all stunned
Eyes of glass, frozen front.
Milo learned, a love's hold
Should never be left to go cold
Now he waits, Love in place
With silent gaze, and frozen face.
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About the Creator
Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin
Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.
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Comments (3)
Oof, that’s chilling—both in love and in fate! A dark, twisted take on holding on too tight. Love left too cold, and now they’re both frozen in time. Creepy, clever, and compact—perfect for the challenge!
I thought at first his love was a doll too. One spooky photo, but beautiful words. Well Done!!!
beautiful, but was his love a doll?