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Mid-Breath, Mid-Fall

A Poem in the Pause Between Faith and Frenzy

By Paul StewartPublished 4 months ago Updated 4 months ago 2 min read
Mid-Breath, Mid-Fall
Photo by The New York Public Library on Unsplash

not exactly,

I say

all the stars are out tonight,

this August night

~

with all the enthusiasm

of an overly fraught—

we wait with baited breath

for the awe-inspiring

~

nightwatchmen

but, my faith is strong

as Perseus, the hero of old,

sends forth arrows

~

and my love

is weakness in the blush,

touched by starlight,

filled with love, honour,

~

and the frenzy

not, out, out, brief candle

in great Ethiopia,

there was a Queen Cassiopeia

~

I say

with all

who ruled her nation

aside her husband Cepheus

~

of a

night watch

and to them

Andromeda was born, their daughter

~

but,

and, in the blush—

beauty was bestowed upon her

with also hubris

~

the frenzy

sex is a tepid form of

retribution

for—

~

Cassiopeia, full of vanity,

did call attention

to her beauty, beauty

that rivalled the sea nymphs

~

the back-to-basics

approach to trust

in her own mind

and angered the great Poseidon

~

but if faith

is the frenzy—

Cetus, legendary beast,

was sent to ravage Ethiopia

~

inhale, exhale

draw the breath—

a compromise was made:

Andromeda was offered as ransom

~

the role

of

the

falling

~

a fair maiden for the nation,

oh, who could save her?

as Perseus first set his eyes

upon the maiden damsel

~

a promise was made,

a pact that set Perseus

on a quest—

~

earth falls

he sought the head

of the great mortal Gorgon, Medusa,

with hair of snakes

~

powers beyond the world he knew,

his wits and wily spirit—

he needed, bravery unbound

~

my breath haunts me,

flowing forward,

from my mouth opened

in agaze—

~

agape drains me

as the coarsest takes his stand.

~

the head he sought,

he did claim

to battle mighty Cetus—

~

the coarsest a foe or no,

hero,

or the t-shirt

in your drawer.

~

with arrows and swords,

gleaming, shining metallic—

and now I am left thinking

~

of everything that

accounts for

banalismistics.

~

he hid and ducked,

slid and ran

and launched attack,

~

brave and true,

he knew what to do,

with blade in hand—

~

he took a swipe

across the neck

of the great Medusa.

~

so, with the dripping,

serpent-crowned terror’s head,

Perseus ventured

across the vast oceans

~

to honour his vow,

not once giving thought

to whether he lived or died—

~

to fight the mighty Cetus

and win the hand of Andromeda,

to win the praise

and derision of the gods themselves

~

Do I ever feel so heroic

and win the praise and derision

of the gods themselves

*

Thanks for reading!

Author's Notes: I had two warring, but connected poems. One was the bones of a very fragmented take on the Somewhere Between Here and There Challenge. The other was for Mike Singleton's August challenge (Which I missed! Sorry, Mike), inspired by the Perseid Meteor Shower and connected t0 Ancient Greek stories of Perseus.

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Paul Stewart

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  • Imola Tóth4 months ago

    What a creative poem, Paul! I loved the lines where you wrote "hero, or the t-shirt in your drawer." And I see now you're making up new words for the dictionary? Is there something you can not do? 😜

  • Gabriel Huizenga4 months ago

    "To win the praise and derision of the gods themselves..." Absolutely epic. This is my first read back on Vocal in months, and I couldn't be happier with this reintroduction!! Stellar work, my friend - looking forward to catching up on a few more of your recent works!

  • John Cox4 months ago

    The gods are not mocked as we artists know too well. And yet… and yet, we dare their glory with every perfected verse, brave their wrath with every vaunted couplet. That is where true madness lies. We write for fame and glory while giving faint praise to the godlike muse who whispers faintly through our pens. Would we but write for their glory alone? I fear not. It is impossible as you yourself have written here, ‘agape drains me as the coarsest takes his stand.’ We are but carnal creatures who strive like men aping gods. If only it were possible for the profane to sing the praises of the sacred, or the mute to speak of their matchless glory. I remember Orpheus and tremble. This is a lovely and philosophical bit of poesy, Paul. It hast stirred my soul.

  • I had a strong sense of dejavu reading this. Sir Paul, what does banalismistics mean? I Googled it but nothing came up 😅😅 Loved your poem! 🍩🥐

  • I loved your analysis and synopsis of the myths!! nice writing.

  • Krysha Thayer4 months ago

    I love the references to Greek mythology and constellations. It shows a lot of knowledge in these things to be able to pull it all together. Well done!

  • Caitlin Charlton4 months ago

    What a beautiful journey through your mind and thoughts gilded in greek mythology. I like that the language was separate from your everyday speech, it pulls us back in time, and brings the journey alive. The words in bold really helps the transition from one line to the other. I like that it's dramatised, especially here. '...inhale, exhale...' I like the pondering at the end. Whether you could ever feel so heroic. Fantastic work Paul 👏🏾👌🏾🤗❤️

  • D. J. Reddall4 months ago

    A compelling concatenation of the classical and the contemporary, my liege!

  • Marilyn Glover4 months ago

    I read this twice, Paul, and loved it! Beautiful work!

  • The map drew me into your magical wordstorm, excellent work

  • Mark Graham4 months ago

    What a poem to describe some mythological people and even said constellations we see at night. Good work.

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