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Metamorphosis

Series: Fragments of my mind

By CyrusPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Top Story - January 2024
"Magical butterfly" from Desktop Nexus

15 February, 2022, past midnight.

Metamorphosis

Conceal.

Don’t show.

Don’t let them in,

To your world of pain.

***

Conceal.

Hold still.

Never reveal,

The turmoil within.

***

Conceal.

Like your life depends on it.

The wolves will eat you

If you let your feelings defeat you.

***

Conceal.

Put on that smile.

Enjoy that pain.

As it kills you within.

***

Dead you are born

Conceal?

No more!

What’s there to hide

If you don’t feel the pain

***

No need for masks,

Your face becomes one

Nothing to feel,

Nothing to hide

Nothing to

Conceal.

***

~ End ~

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  • sleepy drafts2 years ago

    Oh, I love this. I adored, "The wolves will eat you If you let your feelings defeat you." I love your use of the symbolism of butterflies and metamorphosis to emphasize your points in this poem. Beautifully and artistically done. 💗

  • Toby Heward2 years ago

    Love this story

  • Nice job! Following you on Medium!

  • Dana Crandell2 years ago

    Smooth and sad. Well done, and congrtulations!

  • Misbah Sheikh2 years ago

    Beautifully written ❤️

  • Aaliyah Madison2 years ago

    Congratulations to TS

  • Kodah2 years ago

    ❣️ The rhythm was outstanding ❣️

  • Grogu2 years ago

    well done!

  • Andrew Zuk2 years ago

    Congratulations 🎉🎉🎉💗

  • Miranda Ashburn2 years ago

    Excellent.

  • Sad, but sometimes true. We wear many masks, at some point they become our skin. Sometimes it sucks. Sometimes we lose sight of who we actually are anymore.

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Very nicely done.

  • When there is nothing to hide, our lives but open books within which nothing is written.

  • Tressa Rose2 years ago

    Wow this was beautiful

  • Lovely empathic poetry

  • Manisha Dhalani2 years ago

    I sense that a lot of people can resonate with this - I sure did!

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