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Melchior's Misgivings

An Ekphrastic Sonnet

By D. J. ReddallPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Rembrandt, "Adoration of the Magi," 1632

Look, I’m not sure we ought to be here now

She’s just given birth, for pity’s sake, man!

Don’t look at me that way, with furrowed brow

Instead, turn your eyes upward: heaven scan

That’s how you led us on this mad campaign

Insisting that celestial bodies

Foretold the devil’s loss and our good gain;

Old Balthazar there sang sweet melodies

Assuring me of a journey heroic

But I have saddle sores and malaria

Does that bawling wretch sound messianic?!?

I think we’d better clear the area

Gold, frankincense, myrrh, a pounding headache;

Was this whole expedition a mistake?

Ekphrastic

About the Creator

D. J. Reddall

I write because my time is limited and my imagination is not.

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  • Rachel Deemingabout a year ago

    HA! All this way for this?

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a year ago

    Such a clever idea, so well executed. Great work

  • Kodahabout a year ago

    This was well-crafted, DJ! Love it! 💌🌟

  • I think I lack the context to understanding this 😅😅

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