Meet Mother... Won't You?
Breakup Nonet Challenge
She claimed we were soulmates, intertwined
A spiritual connection
Asked me to meet her mother
We'd been dating three weeks ...
Splashed in red she stood
Beckoned me in
To meet Mom's ...
Pieces ...
RUN!!
About the Creator
Andrew C McDonald
Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.
https://www.amazon.com/Killing-Keys-Andrew-C-McDonald-ebook/dp/B07VM843XL?ref_=ast_author_dp
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Comments (5)
Lol. Always a crazy one out there. Glad your narrator ran for the hills!
Oh my, this was soooo delicious! Your cover photo made me so hungry. I was wondering what kinda psycho would want someone who meet their mom just after 3 weeks. Then you said she was in pieces. Now that's perfectly normal hehehehehehe
Glad you ran fast!!!!!!!
Good gravy that escalated quick!
Unique and exceptional, nice work