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Masticationless

Lockjaw Blues

By BrenPublished 10 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - March 2025
Masticationless
Photo by Taylor Vick on Unsplash

i gotta a mouthful of broken teeth

i wear a face of many miles

i’m still walking

i’m still talking

whilst being cautious with my smiles

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i gotta mouthful of empty ashes

taste of the flame long gone

a flicker quickens in my eyes

a distracting diversion yes

and yet totally devoid of surprise

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i gotta mouthful of barbed wire kisses

unkempt rows of greying whiskers

whispering soft razor blade hisses

and you wanna know what this is?

this is a fecund mess of restless misses

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i gotta mouthful of stale wishes

monsters, trucks and broken dishes

no turbulence just swell

and the little dreams left unspoken

they can be broken, as well

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i gotta mouthful of ditch dirt

a butt full of bitch hurt

no buttons on my fuckin shirt

i’m not alarmed i’m just alert

(we need more lerts)

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i gotta mouthful of funny angles

nothing is straight

everything is gonna slide

in a sense deprived

slow motion glide

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i gotta mouthful of melted time

i need an Ortho-Dali-dontist stat!

seconds in my teeth, hours in my throat

this won't be on the test

but you should probably make a note

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i gotta a mouthful of nothing in particular

it is in this particular nothing

i praise and i curse this ornery slack

both pancakes and counterfeit money

look really good in a stack

For Fun

About the Creator

Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler

I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!

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Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

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  1. Easy to read and follow

    Well-structured & engaging content

  2. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

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    Arguments were carefully researched and presented

  1. Eye opening

    Niche topic & fresh perspectives

  2. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

  3. On-point and relevant

    Writing reflected the title & theme

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  • Ruby Red10 months ago

    This is brilliant! Congrats on TS I really loved the rhythm of this one :D

  • Andrea Corwin 10 months ago

    Congrats 🎉🎊 So many great - I mean, the flames, but no surprises; Barbed wire kisses and mouthful of stale wishes Great job!

  • Congrats on Top Story! 🎉 Well deserved. Keep up the good work!

  • Paul Stewart10 months ago

    Thought I had commented, cos I know I liked this when it was published! This is among your finest work, Brenton! Congrats on a stunning Top Story that made me think and laugh a lot1

  • Marilyn Glover10 months ago

    Brenton, from the intro to the end, I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. It has so many slick lines and poetic artistry that I am not surprised you landed a top story. Congratulations, and thank you for making me smile this morning. 👏 😊

  • Belle10 months ago

    Really provocative! Congrats on top story!!

  • Very good work, congrats 👏

  • Damn...this has a fantastic bite

  • Grz Colm10 months ago

    Barbed wire kisses! Ouch! There was some other funny stuff I enjoyed as well!

  • Babs Iverson10 months ago

    Impressive and loved it!!!

  • Lamar Wiggins10 months ago

    Lots of great lines here, Brenton!

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