i gotta a mouthful of broken teeth
i wear a face of many miles
i’m still walking
i’m still talking
whilst being cautious with my smiles
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i gotta mouthful of empty ashes
taste of the flame long gone
a flicker quickens in my eyes
a distracting diversion yes
and yet totally devoid of surprise
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i gotta mouthful of barbed wire kisses
unkempt rows of greying whiskers
whispering soft razor blade hisses
and you wanna know what this is?
this is a fecund mess of restless misses
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i gotta mouthful of stale wishes
monsters, trucks and broken dishes
no turbulence just swell
and the little dreams left unspoken
they can be broken, as well
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i gotta mouthful of ditch dirt
a butt full of bitch hurt
no buttons on my fuckin shirt
i’m not alarmed i’m just alert
(we need more lerts)
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i gotta mouthful of funny angles
nothing is straight
everything is gonna slide
in a sense deprived
slow motion glide
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i gotta mouthful of melted time
i need an Ortho-Dali-dontist stat!
seconds in my teeth, hours in my throat
this won't be on the test
but you should probably make a note
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i gotta a mouthful of nothing in particular
it is in this particular nothing
i praise and i curse this ornery slack
both pancakes and counterfeit money
look really good in a stack
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
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Comments (11)
This is brilliant! Congrats on TS I really loved the rhythm of this one :D
Congrats 🎉🎊 So many great - I mean, the flames, but no surprises; Barbed wire kisses and mouthful of stale wishes Great job!
Congrats on Top Story! 🎉 Well deserved. Keep up the good work!
Thought I had commented, cos I know I liked this when it was published! This is among your finest work, Brenton! Congrats on a stunning Top Story that made me think and laugh a lot1
Brenton, from the intro to the end, I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. It has so many slick lines and poetic artistry that I am not surprised you landed a top story. Congratulations, and thank you for making me smile this morning. 👏 😊
Really provocative! Congrats on top story!!
Very good work, congrats 👏
Damn...this has a fantastic bite
Barbed wire kisses! Ouch! There was some other funny stuff I enjoyed as well!
Impressive and loved it!!!
Lots of great lines here, Brenton!