True obsession unveiling callused hands
Sizzling metal eagerly limping. Longing
Shaped into gallant hardware tortuously
Hoarse echoes around. Roaring inferno nestling graft
Throat athirst some tonic ease.
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Author's note: thought a 5 line poem was not stimulating enough, so I decided to make it a harder on myself (not that it would make the poem any better).
About the Creator
Mo Darasi
I write fiction, poetry and occasional articles about interesting topics.
Finding interesting ways to write a poem or hide messages within them seems to be my main interesting in writing now, and it's been fun
Camellia
piercing winter gloom camellia blooms softly such a lovely sight. In winter, in the arboretum and the yards in our region, camellias blooms. Camellia is a tea family plant with lovely flowers. In Japan, camellias have been painted very frequently. Here is one by me (watercolor).
By Seema Patel6 days ago in Poets
Comments (4)
A great take on the challenge. I like your spelling idea!
Great vocabulary usage!
So clever! I haven't seen one like this before. Good luck in the challenge!
WOW- this is such a clever take on the challenge!! The extra dimension of spelling the words with opening letters is such a brilliant choice, which you executed masterfully; the lines are so full of rich words too, making this piece really sing. Great work :)