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Mad Hairdresser

A poem

By Moon DesertPublished 3 years ago Updated 10 months ago 1 min read
Photo by Emma Ou on Unsplash

She plucked my hair

With great heartlessness

In her clumsy fingers

Stretching, scratching my scalp

*

Until I told her so

I pulled my punches

So, she changed accordingly

In a split second

*

It looked horrendously wrong

Pathetic, all sorts of

When her one eye peeked at one way

The other scowled at me

*

It didn’t last long

This deed of destruction done on my hair

However, it left a disgusting feeling

Wounds requiring proper healing

*

And my decision never to come back in again

To this hairdressing salon full of flies

Although I got a loyalty card

I will never use it in my life

*

As I had to wait to pay

Before a regular clientele was served

For this was their breed

I doubt they’ll even notice me leaving

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September 2022

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Thank you for reading!

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About the Creator

Moon Desert

UK-based

BA in Cultural Studies

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Crime Fiction: Love

Poetry: Friend

Psychology: Salvation

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock3 years ago

    Ugh! That's one loyalty card you keep posted where you always see it as a reminder, not just for where not to go, but also how not to be.

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