
Dear Luna, lone keeper of the skies,
With glowing beams and watchful eyes
You’ve been here through every joy and ache
A silent witness wide awake
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When I was young and full of dreams
You guided me home in midnight beams
From back seat windows quiet and small
Your gentle glow would calm it all
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Through every storm I've had to face
I've always felt your quiet grace
even when clouds filter out your glow
You've still put on the most beautiful show
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You've watched me laugh you've watched me cry
You've kept my secrets in the sky
You’ve watched me fall then rise anew
Each success shared each trial too
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From my first kiss to love's bitter end
You’ve been a constant glowing friend
No need for words no need for sound
Your light and comfort wrap around
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You rise and fall but still remain
A witness of joy a witness of pain
And even when you hide from view
I feel your light come shining through
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So, here’s my thanks, Celestial Guide,
For always standing by my side
We're worlds apart but still so near
A faithful glow forever here
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With all my love I write to say
You’ve never once felt far away
And in your light I’ve come to see
That you are always there with me
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Thank you for staying through every trial
for being my calm when I've lost my smile
Tonight I'll look up like I always do
same sky, same shine, still steady, still true
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You've seen me change you've watched me grow
a silent witness in moonlit glow
so here I write beneath your aura
still dreaming big, love always Sara
About the Creator
Sara Wilson
I love Ugly Things.
I try and be active AND interactive.
I write... whatever I feel.
Sometimes it's happy.. sometimes it isn't. But it's real. And it's me.
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Comments (6)
Magnificent! 💪🏾🎉
This was beautiful and I like how the moon has always been there for you.
- Love that Lone keeper of the skies, reference. 🌕✨ It's so lovely that the moon has been there through every joy and ache. - aww I could actually see you in the back seat. Little, young Sara staring up at the moon 🌝 🌕✨I love how you acknowledge when the cloud filter out it's glow. Fantastic attention to detail. - 'you have never once felt far away' don't make me cry. This was such a beautiful line of gratitude. The moon shows us that it is more reliable than other things in life. 🌕✨Really do like this line. Same sky, Same shine, still steady, still true. I crave things that don't change. So this was nurturing me as I read. - love how you kept the rhyme going, even to the point of when you typed your name. Outstanding work as always, Sara 🤗❤️🖤👏🏾👌🏾
Awww, this was soooowonderful and I loved the way it rhymed!
This is beautiful. I really love how you turned something constant and distant into such a comforting, personal presence.
Lovely entry, good luck! 🤞