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I want to know what love is. If music be the food of love, play on. What is love?

By Rachel DeemingPublished 12 months ago โ€ข 1 min read
Love
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Foreigner, Shakespeare, Haddaway.

To them, you are elusive, cloaked.

But you're all around, aren't you?

What do singers and poets know?

I think you like to hide

But you're never concealed.

Give us a wink,

A sexy smirk.

There you are!

Right here in the person

Who holds my love.

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Rachel Deeming

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  • Susan Payton10 months ago

    I think I danced through it instead of read through it. Nicely done!!

  • Andrea Corwin 11 months ago

    Nice one! And I love that Journey song๐ŸŽถโค๏ธ well done.

  • D.K. Shepard12 months ago

    Cheeky, clever, and stirring! This is such a fun one!

  • Leslie Writes12 months ago

    Love is all around and not as complicated as some would have us believe! Brilliant response to the challenge ๐Ÿฉท

  • Very cleverly cute. I love Foreignerโ€™s song โ€œI want to know what love isโ€.๐Ÿ’–

  • A. J. Schoenfeld12 months ago

    Very nicely done. I love how this starts general then ends so personal.

  • A human pocket. They're the person who holds our love. Don't ask me why that was the first thing that came to mind when I read your last two lines ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜… Loved your poem!

  • Calvin London12 months ago

    Very cleverly done, Rachel and with a touch of subtle humor, like spice on the top of a cake. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

  • Caroline Craven12 months ago

    Dang! I think I sang this rather than reading it! Love this!

  • Komal12 months ago

    This feels like a smooth dance of words! Love being elusive yet always present, and a cheeky wink to the one who holds it. There's something magical about the way you bring it all together, playful and real.โœจ

  • Maryam Batool12 months ago

    Them playing a cute little hide and seek but actually being there and always being there is the cutest thing ๐Ÿ’– What do singers and poets know?" such a sweet expression ๐Ÿฅฐ

  • Karen Cave12 months ago

    I knew this was going to be fantastic, as soon as I read the title, and sang the songs in my head ;) Wonderful. A big fan of love here. Lovely, playful writing x

  • John Cox12 months ago

    You are on a tear with this challenge! Made to order for Rachel!

  • Cathy holmes12 months ago

    Aww. How clever.

  • Jay Kantor12 months ago

    Rd - Ah, 'To Be Loved' ~ You had me at the 'Wink' ~ Jb

  • verse voyager12 months ago

    This is wonderfully clever and playful, with a touch of mystery and charm! The way you weave intrigue with a dash of humor is delightful. Short, sweet, and impactful!

  • Sean A.12 months ago

    Gorgeous work!

  • Cindy๐ŸŽ€12 months ago

    This is such a clever take on loveโ€”like itโ€™s playing hide-and-seek but always right there when it matters. The last line hits perfectlyโ€”so sweet and real!๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿฝ

  • Ruth Stewart12 months ago

    This is a lovely light way to show your appreciation of your love. Nice work!

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