Love at first sight: Sonnet
This is why I write under a pen name, putting this sort of stuff out is challenging. it's either good or terrible, no in-between. I have no idea, properly awful

(This is my worst one, please do not read this)
Edit 2 - Why is this my most read story on here? it's so bad please DO NOT READ THIS IT IS AWFUL)
Call it pathetic if you must
A Venus of the most Holiness
Perhaps just a case of winter lust
Maybe even just a symptom of loneliness
She wasn’t looking to impress
just watching a video on her phone
like any another girl on the express
residing in her own little zone
The regret once the train sped past Tilling Springs
If only God hadn’t made me so shy
As before I knew it she had flapped her wings
Nothing spectacular caught my eye
It was just when you were sipping on chamomile
I caught a glimpse of a wonderful smile
About the Creator
Some Guy
I kinda suck at writing but I enjoy it
Anyway, here's a dumb little haiku:
The gunslinger draws
His opponent does the same
oh dear, they both died



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