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Love at first sight: Sonnet

This is why I write under a pen name, putting this sort of stuff out is challenging. it's either good or terrible, no in-between. I have no idea, properly awful

By Some GuyPublished 4 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read

(This is my worst one, please do not read this)

Edit 2 - Why is this my most read story on here? it's so bad please DO NOT READ THIS IT IS AWFUL)

Call it pathetic if you must

A Venus of the most Holiness

Perhaps just a case of winter lust

Maybe even just a symptom of loneliness

She wasn’t looking to impress

just watching a video on her phone

like any another girl on the express

residing in her own little zone

The regret once the train sped past Tilling Springs

If only God hadn’t made me so shy

As before I knew it she had flapped her wings

Nothing spectacular caught my eye

It was just when you were sipping on chamomile

I caught a glimpse of a wonderful smile

love poems

About the Creator

Some Guy

I kinda suck at writing but I enjoy it

Anyway, here's a dumb little haiku:

The gunslinger draws

His opponent does the same

oh dear, they both died

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