From Mel Brooks' Comedy Masterpiece: "Spaceballs"
"Love sucks," said the God to the Vampyre,
But She laughed because She already knows
That love not only sucks, it blows,
And He burned too hard and lost his fire
Because round and round and round it goes
And it throws off those who can't dance on their toes.
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C. Rommial Butler
C. Rommial Butler is a writer, musician and philosopher from Indianapolis, IN. His works can be found online through multiple streaming services and booksellers.
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Comments (16)
Dark humor, yet I found myself laughing. Nicely done!!!
Powerful images and deep emotions beautifully provide a captivating exploration of love. A mesmerizing experience and excellent work!
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Dark humor! I love it. Great job, Charles!
Hahahahahahaha that made me laugh. Loved it!
Fantastic! Go CRB! 💪🏾
Love not only sucks it blows! Delightfully whimsical and darkly cynical, Rommi. Loved your comic and contrarian entry to the challenge. PS. Best line from Space Balls: “I’m surrounded by assholes!”
Way to go on this one. It might be sad but it was funny.
This is fantastic and nice using the Spaceballs clip! Well wrought sir, as you would say!
Excellent!
This was fun to read!
Really well written ✍️♦️♦️♦️♦️
Haha. Well done.
Good one❤️
Bravo!! Love this!! Plus love the Mel Brooks clip, lol
Love the wordplay!