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Longing for Long Desires

November Rain Challenge (unofficial)

By Thavien YliasterPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Image by mateya from Pixabay | https://pixabay.com/photos/rain-november-autumn-nature-696068/ | https://pixabay.com/users/mateya-885910/

The children play, splashing in puddles.

"Kawaii," I say, speaking in Japanese.

Baby fever grips my paternal desires.

I studied, worked, and save money.

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To prepare for my future family.

To become a husband and father.

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Thavien's Token:

Made for Mother Combs' unofficial November Rain Challenge.

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About the Creator

Thavien Yliaster

Thank You for stopping by. Please, make yourself comfortable. I'm a novice poet, fiction writer, and dream journalist.

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  • Dana Crandell2 years ago

    I don't know why I'm seeing this one so late, but I really enjoyed it!

  • I wish you all the best for your future! Loved your poem!

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Very nice and good luck to you.

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Love nature poems!!! Brilliant and loving it!!!

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