Broken bones mend
whilst words will
forever upend—
𓆱
words, are living things:
they have personality,
point of view,
appendages
that rub and rue—
𓆱
those we ought
to sever,
never to speak
as spoken to.
𓆱
Words are deciduous:
they form, then fall
between us—
for better or worse—
becoming the foliage
of our lineage,
𓆱
toothy leaves
marching along
the sycamores
of our past,
𓆱
advancing in season,
more
and more,
then falling back
as the days shorten,
𓆱
leaving barren the bark
that bore them.
𓆱
To carry on by becoming
barren
is fruitful
in its own way:
𓆱
Mother Nature's
eternal bouquet,
tossed to the next in line—
𓆱
caught off guard
by the golden sun
as dusk reclaims
the rose of dawn.
𓆱
Words find recess
in rituals for rest:
the way my grandmother
would digress
with the hummingbirds,
𓆱
the way she winked
in that golden hour—
her light burning
through her syllables,
𓆱
appendages
dropping down
on sorbent soil,
decomposed
of meaning,
saturated
with feeling—
𓆱
in the words, she became
the light where they fell,
like the sycamore,
barren.
𓆱
And she rests here,
in these living words.
About the Creator
Pixel Floyd
I write poetry. Inspired by the undefined spaces where words take their chances.
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Comments (7)
Pixel, what gorgeous poetry! "barren is fruitful in its own way" & "the way my grandmother would digress with the hummingbirds"- My favorite lines! Congratulations on your win! 👏 👏
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
So beautiful and vivid. Thank you.
gorgeous!!!!
A powerful piece! It makes you instantly rethink what you say and what you leave unspoken.
beautiful ode to words!
Nice poem