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Lines Within Start

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By Canuck Scriber Lisa LachapellePublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read

The heart, like choirs in remembrance

The hand, each finger a sense to touch branches

The lines of our palms form a pavilion to thee

If the mind that touches heart and hand bends the flow

Would the doors to the mind's temple open or close

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Canuck Scriber Lisa Lachapelle

Vocal Top Story 13 times + Awesome Story 2X. Author of Award Winning Novel Small Tales and Visits to Heaven XI Edition + books of poems, etc. Also in lit journal, anthology, magazine + award winning entries.

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  • 𝐑𝐌𝐒about a year ago

    This is beautifully done, Lisa! Bravo!

  • Kenneth cruzabout a year ago

    Intriguing and most beautiful

  • Denise E Lindquistabout a year ago

    Nice! Thank you!😊💕

  • Wonderful words to ponder on

  • Shirley Belkabout a year ago

    Ahhh, made me wonder!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Loved it!!!❤️❤️💕

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