Limbo

💙+💚 =💘⚡— a Haiku

By Lightning Bolt ⚡Published about a year ago • Updated 8 months ago • 1 min read

So I just wait?

"Emotionally

"detached"<-— that's what he tells me

"don't know how I feel."

💔 by

___________________Bolt ⚡

Bolt ⚡ aka Bill, a bizarre bisexual bipolar epileptic⚡🧠⚡ Taco Bell Futurist 🌮🔔

Demons & Phobias & Prophets, oh my!

Rowan Finley about a year ago
This is very relatable!
Mark Grahamabout a year ago
What a way to look at a place known as Limbo for some of us could end up there with decisions to make. Great work.
Komalabout a year ago
Your haiku hits deep but keeps it real—so raw and relatable. That "don’t know how I feel" line? Oof, it says everything while saying almost nothing. 🥺✨ Love how it packs so much into so little!💖
Antoni De'Leonabout a year ago
I feel that. I hear that. Truth in a little Haiku.
ROCK aka Andrea Polla (Simmons)about a year ago
Lots of fast, hard feelings packed into this haiku. Loved it
Michelle Liew Tsui-Linabout a year ago
Yup, it's hard to associate with someone who's emotionally detached.
Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a year ago
Emotional detachment sucks, especially when we're deeply attached emotionally to them 🥺 Sending you lots of love and hugs ❤️
Mike Singleton 💜 Mikeydred about a year ago
perfect description of being lost
Gloria Penelopeabout a year ago
Super deep! I loved it.
Karan w. about a year ago
Wow! This is so deep and beautifully crafted!