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Lily’s Blossoming Muse

A girl on a lily

By CrissziaPublished 2 years ago 1 min read

In a garden of blooms, a lily stood tall,

A girl emerged, enchanting and small.

Her spirit, delicate as petals kissed by dew,

An ethereal presence, a vision anew.

Within the lily's embrace, she found her retreat,

A sanctuary of beauty, where her dreams would meet.

Her laughter echoed through the fragrant air,

As she twirled with grace, without a care.

Her heart bloomed like the petals so fair,

Radiating love and kindness, beyond compare.

In harmony with nature, she danced and spun,

A girl in a lily, a bond that couldn't be undone.

The lily whispered secrets, known only to her,

Of love and growth, of strength and allure.

She blossomed in the sunlight, petals unfurled,

A symbol of resilience, the beauty of the world.

childrens poetry

About the Creator

Crisszia

Poems and Fiction are great duo❤️

https://get-cc.cc/marycrisfelias3

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Comments (25)

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  • Bernadith2 years ago

    Looking forward for more!!

  • Manisha Dhalani2 years ago

    Good series of poems!

  • Nathan2 years ago

    Impressive😊

  • Raymond2 years ago

    Nice poem

  • Kevin2 years ago

    Love the poem👏

  • Vagne2 years ago

    I’ve read a similar one with this poem but good job to the author

  • Lalaine2 years ago

    Very nice poem 😁

  • Mikey2 years ago

    A great poem to share for kids 👍👍

  • Kyle 2 years ago

    Your poems’ illustrations are mostly animated which I love the most ❤️🥹

  • Luke Tan2 years ago

    Love it!❤️❤️

  • Aljean Park2 years ago

    Nice poem. Gotta recommend this to my little sister.

  • Lily Jones2 years ago

    I love the author’s choice of words

  • Warren Adams2 years ago

    Lilies belong to the genus Lilium and are characterized by their elegant, trumpet-shaped flowers and pleasant fragrance.

  • Paul Williams2 years ago

    Nice poem for children❤️

  • Jin Roberts2 years ago

    This poem might be short but children would love to read this with a cute illustration

  • Walf Homes2 years ago

    Lilies are known for their large, showy flowers and are often associated with purity and beauty

  • Carl James2 years ago

    Looking forward for your new poems with amazing illustrations 🤩

  • Xavier Lee2 years ago

    Good job

  • Lexie2 years ago

    I love your poems, author!

  • Vincent Mack2 years ago

    The girl looks like in an anime I watched before

  • Leah Vidal2 years ago

    Through this poem, I remember a story similar to this that I used to love when I was still a child.

  • Rean Ruiz2 years ago

    I really love the picture. That girl is pretty.

  • Mary Cruz2 years ago

    I love your poem. I want more!!

  • Grace Rosa2 years ago

    Nice picture which fits the poem

  • Arslan2 years ago

    love to read

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