I looked for dawn
inside the rain,
I carried doubts,
no stairway to go on
I feared darkness
when all lights go out,
and yet,
when last step came,
I felt your light,
you glowed
in love,
you took my hand,
there's so much sunshine,
in your eyes
I can't let go,
I feel heart smiling
every time
we share sunlight.
***
Sunset and moon
still keep heart bridge,
I feel your love
lifted on breeze,
I tell each flower
and the wind
there is no other love
to last lifetimes
of laughter,
dreams
I want to be on the same wave
I will know you
each time you call my name.
***
© 2023 Amy Christie
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Amy Christie
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Comments (3)
Very beautiful, I loved every word you wrote.You are so great Amy 🙏👍
I loved this. I read it through four times. I don't think they all count, but anyway. It's magical. Every word is doing a lot of heavy lifting, and the imagery and sentiment are beautiful 😁
That is beautiful!