Light Breaks Water
An Acrostic For The Vocal "Light Breaks Water" Challenge
Introduction
This is an Acrostic on the theme with a little mythology woven in.
The music is "Mermaids" by Florence and The Machine
Light Breaks Water
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Luminessence Brightly Shining
Igniting Fire On The Ocean
Glistening Foam, The Waves Rolling
Helios' Rays Give Liquid Sheen
Triton's Realm With Mermaids Swimming
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Breakers Hitting The Sandy Shore
Reflecting The Sun's Gleaming Rays
Evanescent Waves Are No More
And Light Shines On The Waterways
Know Triton's Light Is Ever Here
Sea Life Illuminates His Days
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Where Does All The Magic Come From?
Aver The Ocean Sorceress
This Is The Glow Cast By Triton
Everlasting And Luminous
Rays Fall On The Lit Blue Ocean
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About the Creator
Mike Singleton π Mikeydred
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Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insight
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
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Comments (14)
I love the acrostic, and you did it justice, Mike. This felt magical, and your image pairs beautifully!
Nice acrostic!
Lovely acrostic, Mike. <3 Great entry
I love acrostics - such beautiful imagery in this one!
Excellent work Mike πππ
Very fantastical spin on the challenge. π§πΌββοΈI enjoyed it.
Gorgeous work, Mike!
Gorgeous! The idea to use am acrostic poem was genius. Good luck! My new poem is linked.
Oooo, you went with an Acrostic for this challenge, so brilliant! This was so beautiful!
Beautiful - excellent acrostic and entry to challenge!
Beautiful compilation of words, music and image. It all fits together perfectly.
Excellent work ππ
This should get a TS for it shows classic characters and the image matches the words so cleverly.
This is a lovely acrostic. I love the image, too. And music.