This is not the end.
Brilliant, they fall through chill air
Provender for Spring
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Anyone who follows me on Vocal knows I love the colors of Fall. I also love the metamorphosis that follows.
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Written for the Vocal "Falling Leaves" Challenge:
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Dana Crandell
Dad, Stepdad, Grandpa, Husband, lover of Nature and dogs.
Poet, Writer, Editor, Photographer, Artist and Tech/Internet nerd.
My first published poetry collection: Life, Love & Ludicrosity
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Comments (9)
Autumn is nature's last display before the bleakness of winter! It deserves to be celebrated like fireworks! Excellently captured and written here Dana!
Makes me think how leaves let go, somehow knowing they will form part of spring. Can I let go, too? 🍂🍁
Love this glorious haiku, and that last line is 💥! Beautiful job, Dana! ✨🩷
Fall is indeed my favorite time, there is so much happening in nature
Oooo, provender is a new word for me. Loved your beautiful Haiku!
Fall is my Kenny's favorite season, and the one in which I begin my struggle with death blazing all around me. I appreciate this view from you. Bless.
I always loved the idea that autumn is just the beginning of a cycle. That's why I love proper seasons (even though we don't really have them where I live). Well done.
I love (this is not the end) I use it to live by lol
Ohhh, masterclass in autumnal haiku writing, right there! Well done, sir! That last line is stupendous!