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Where Does it End?

Falling into Darkness

By Dana CrandellPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
Where Does it End?
Photo by Marten Newhall on Unsplash

I scream, plunging down

Past souls in the inky depths

And smell rotting flesh.

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Written for the Vocal Haunted Echoes Challenge. Enter it here:

Haikusurreal poetry

About the Creator

Dana Crandell

Dad, Stepdad, Grandpa, Husband, lover of Nature and dogs.

Poet, Writer, Editor, Photographer, Artist and Tech/Internet nerd.

My first published poetry collection: Life, Love & Ludicrosity

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  • Sam Spinelli4 months ago

    This one lingers after ya read it. Conjured up the senses, in a very disturbing way. Great haiku.

  • JBaz4 months ago

    Very vivid and detailed with smart word choices.

  • That sure was creeepppyyyy! Loved it so much!

  • Margaret Brennan4 months ago

    things nightmares are made from. GREAT poem.

  • Stephanie Hoogstad4 months ago

    Ooohhh, nice and creepy, Dana! It kind of gives me the same vibes as Poe's short story "The Pit and the Pendulum", but in haiku form (if that makes sense).

  • Tiffany Gordon4 months ago

    Phenomenal work Dana! 💪🏾

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