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Broken.
Broken like shattered glass,
Scattered shards,
Hopeless.
Hoping for something,
Nothing comes.
What is love?
Is it dangerous?
A feared connection?
Afraid of what?
A mere rejection?
Or something real?
Something true?
Like fearing the feeling of finding a future,
With someone new.
Love is kind,
Let it bloom.
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Dylan
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Comments (6)
This is absolutely beautiful and perfectly describes the feeling of fear one feels when falling for someone. Great job!
“ fearing the feeling of finding a future” is a hell of a line and great use of alliteration
This poem is truly beautiful! It really makes you think deeply and reflects the emotions so well.✨
This is a tender and heartfelt piece, balancing the fragility of love with its hopeful resilience. The imagery of brokenness contrasted with the blossoming of love is beautifully done. A gentle reminder that even in fear, love has the power to heal and grow. Let it bloom indeed!
Very hopeful ❤️
I love this poem! Let this poem bloom! Great work!