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Keep Me

A Rose Grew Sick in the Mirror

By Branden NavedoPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Keep Me
Photo by Helmut Bröll on Unsplash

At first, the flower kept a gold to her stem,

but in the mirror, she donned a green instead.

Having lost her glow, she’d wilt into her bed,

yet paler have made puddles of lesser men.

He’d tend to thorns along her throat and leg

that limp became after days of praying; beg!

That she could draw tears from him again,

for he grew numb; and he yearned to tread

on soils yet unsullied by the rose. She said

“You loved me only for my health and went

as the winds do with my earthy scent; dread /

the day that I stand tall again, that you fled,

when I forgot what made me beautiful, I bent.”

heartbreak

About the Creator

Branden Navedo

I've mostly written poetry all my life which carries into my other writing. I also love wandering, so if you tell me to get lost I'll gladly oblige. In other words, yes, I respond well to criticisms. Click here for my author website!

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