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keep calm and breathe

in murky waters

By Moon DesertPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Photo by Pietro De Grandi on Unsplash

so many things left unsaid

as if hidden under an invisible carpet

where we all went, inadvertently

and I kept all our secrets spare

from the world’s greatest affairs

that will catch up with us in the end

in a different form and shape

holding on to old pains

when we all know that’s not the way

decimated by diseases of all kinds

physical, mental, and combined

we all know we are one team

just left unsaid, revealed

antagonistic attitude from all of us

misunderstood, pushed off the deck

bearing the lack of good intentions in mind

what was all this for?

we only have one life

so, what if we drown

in this chaotic, unpredictable flow?

what if we helped each other out

be on opposite sides

unable to return

to the original calm state of mind?

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Moon Desert

UK-based

BA in Cultural Studies

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock3 years ago

    I'm not quite sure what you're trying to say here, Mescaline, which may very well be the point. The dichotomies & tensions represented here, especially being all on one team, but opposite sides, pushing off the boat, drowning in uncertain currents--it all feels like how we are in real life, uncertain of anything, emotions & thoughts going all over the place, often without taking so much as a breath, searching for that place where we can be calm, home, never quite being able to find it. Yeah, I could spend a long time with this, Mescaline, every five minutes deciding it means something different than what I thought before. Well done.

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