Keep an eye on your reflection
They want to be noticed
i saw my reflection in the window today
she waved, to get my attention
her expression was blank, but she had something to say
about her warped and distorted dimension
i stood there and stared, as she moved her lips
the shape of her face, elongated
her eyes rolled back and she started to strip
i became anxious and very frustrated
as she shed her clothes, i started to laugh
the angles were just too bazaar
i watched in horror, as she ripped in half
and i was hit hard, by a car
as they hauled me away from the horrific scene
i watched as a smile crossed her face
and i realized something completely obscene
she had killed me so she’d take my place
About the Creator
Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition
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Comments (6)
Whoaaaa, I did not see that coming!
Keep an eye on your reflection, but only one, I take it.
Oh wow, that ending was unexpected. Great job.
Well, that went sideways in a hurry! Great job, Kelli!
I didn't expect that - good job!
My goodness! This is great. Love the dark side of it all! Love how your mind works!