The Beast In The Shadow
New Suit
Headlights pierced the tree lined darkness
Limb over limb, webbed canopies
Secrets kept, the light a witness
veiled the moonlit vanities
Tales to tell, soft lips kept silent
the wind and the willows whisper and whine
Coming, a storm, restless and violent
things in the shadows, keep them in line
Follow the path to the edge of the river
sit on the banks, let the water caress
The chill in the air, makes a courageous man shiver
but he stands bold and brave all alone, nonetheless
The water is cold, running fast, is the current
the farther he wades the fear grows deep inside
His blood running cold, becoming a servant
to the thing in the shadows, he no longer can hide
Pale and weak, he surrenders his body
no power to fight, he lies still on the ground
The beast from the shadows appears, disembodied
devoured the man like a starving wild hound
Taking new form, the beast slips into the darkness
adjusting this body, like a new suit and tie
Silently he waits all alone in the stillness
for one who dares his domain to pass by
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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
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Comments (8)
This was absolutely fantastic! Very creative!
Chilling yet beautiful ❤️
Waiting, fearfully bold, to be devoured by shadows?
Excellent piece. Well done, as always.
Oh, this is dark, but the rhymes makes it graceful as well. As always, fantastic! Loved those last lines 😍😍
Almost like a self sacrifice! This is a deliciously foreboding tale. 🥰
Chilling, yet beautiful.
Wow, no shadows for this guy, enjoyed this a lot 😊