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The Beast In The Shadow

New Suit

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
The Beast In The Shadow
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Headlights pierced the tree lined darkness

Limb over limb, webbed canopies

Secrets kept, the light a witness

veiled the moonlit vanities

Tales to tell, soft lips kept silent

the wind and the willows whisper and whine

Coming, a storm, restless and violent

things in the shadows, keep them in line

Follow the path to the edge of the river

sit on the banks, let the water caress

The chill in the air, makes a courageous man shiver

but he stands bold and brave all alone, nonetheless

The water is cold, running fast, is the current

the farther he wades the fear grows deep inside

His blood running cold, becoming a servant

to the thing in the shadows, he no longer can hide

Pale and weak, he surrenders his body

no power to fight, he lies still on the ground

The beast from the shadows appears, disembodied

devoured the man like a starving wild hound

Taking new form, the beast slips into the darkness

adjusting this body, like a new suit and tie

Silently he waits all alone in the stillness

for one who dares his domain to pass by

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran3 years ago

    This was absolutely fantastic! Very creative!

  • C. H. Richard3 years ago

    Chilling yet beautiful ❤️

  • Waiting, fearfully bold, to be devoured by shadows?

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    Excellent piece. Well done, as always.

  • Gina C.3 years ago

    Oh, this is dark, but the rhymes makes it graceful as well. As always, fantastic! Loved those last lines 😍😍

  • J. S. Wade3 years ago

    Almost like a self sacrifice! This is a deliciously foreboding tale. 🥰

  • Dana Crandell3 years ago

    Chilling, yet beautiful.

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