Jabberwocky
Wonderland Poetry Prompt Challenge Day 24

Your tongue is tied,
cramped from its labor:
lip-service and laments,
twisting prophecy from parking tickets,
doom from unloaded dishwashers.
You monologue like a thundercloud,
over breakfast,
foretelling despair,
in the sogginess of cereal,
and how the day didn't start off
with just the right tone,
the sun glinting through the window
wrong.
Every spilled cup is symbolic
every sigh a soliloquy.
You speak in psalms of pity
as if your calendar
were made for tragedies,
names written in expo,
scheduled to take turns
making you the victim.
Imagine the audacity
And when the world doesn't end,
exactly on time,
you sulk in darkened corners,
complaining about the shadows,
as if the loneliness your ego creates
isn't an apocalypse of a different kind.
The intent behind every word I utter
spun into serpentine silk
within your ears,
so you paint me the snake,
accuse me of hissing,
when all I have done
is refused to speak Jabberwocky.
Participant's Poems:
About the Creator
Ellie Hoovs
Breathing life into the lost and broken. Writes to mend what fire couldn't destroy. Poetry stitched from ashes, longing, and stubborn hope.
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Comments (8)
Here’s my entry for Jabberwocky: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/jabberwocky-ga1a2t0xn0%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cstyle data-emotion-css="w4qknv-Replies">.css-w4qknv-Replies{display:grid;gap:1.5rem;}
Great interpretation of jabberwocky, Ellie! Here is my nonsense acrostic for Day 24! https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/jabberwocky-8x2pza0x9w%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
A nonsensical entry for Day 24! https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/a-coat-of-cracked-teacups%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
We all know those catastrophizing sorts, and they want to be lumped in with the realists. Bah! Good things happen in reality, too. https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/tiptoeing-through-the-tulgey-wood%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/jabberwocky-s68mp0jhr%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E I like the salt of yours. How about speaking Jabberwookiee?
Here’s my nonsense poem🥹: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/a-chap-called-jabberwocky%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E I had never heard of jabberwocky, had to look it up 🥺… I enjoyed your clever poe… not a nice chap to speak it!
I took a different approach, and it was slightly light-hearted for me to balance the sad poems. Absolute jabberwocky: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/raining-jabberwocky%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E 😊😊😊
Accusing me of hissing. 😂 Than made me laugh. Nicely done, Ellie! Day24 … I need to catch up today! 😳